tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post3276263842626987560..comments2023-10-19T08:02:36.500-04:00Comments on Blackbird in my Window: CrackedAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15651950963978497844noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-21444479007057704402011-11-02T13:06:30.340-04:002011-11-02T13:06:30.340-04:00Cute story, it will be interesting to see how it p...Cute story, it will be interesting to see how it pans it when Jo finds out who Meda really is, but I think they have a strong enough friendship to see it through.Craig Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07176851401465801580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-30557099346025696962011-10-31T15:29:33.791-04:002011-10-31T15:29:33.791-04:00What a fun, sweet scene! I really love stories abo...What a fun, sweet scene! I really love stories about friendship and this scene felt very authentic & relatable. Great jobs!Jenny Kaczorowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00289053983485597342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-39782859949021075032011-10-30T13:29:10.905-04:002011-10-30T13:29:10.905-04:00I really liked this. Great voice.I really liked this. Great voice.Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-4095187161200065702011-10-30T09:44:35.364-04:002011-10-30T09:44:35.364-04:00Thanks guys! I really appreciate the feedback.
@i...Thanks guys! I really appreciate the feedback.<br /><br />@ilima I'm always looking for beta readers if you're interested.... :-D.SwiftScribblerhttp://www.swiftscribbler.weebly.com/blog.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-67248643173034750812011-10-29T17:40:07.176-04:002011-10-29T17:40:07.176-04:00Great story of friendship. Love how sheltered she ...Great story of friendship. Love how sheltered she seems to be with the whole friend thing. <br /><br />Unique descriptions. Nice flow.<br /><br />Also like the Wizard of Oz thing you mentioned, and with the heart thing.<br /><br />Really enjoyed this scene!<br /><br />Thumbs up!Melindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11542106414099032742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5006495995784674502.post-22517991005441596552011-10-29T01:30:50.661-04:002011-10-29T01:30:50.661-04:00Oh my gosh, I absolutely adore this scene and want...Oh my gosh, I absolutely adore this scene and want to read this story based on these 300 words alone. I LOVE both of these characters (based on their dialogue, mannerisms, and your introduction). I think my heart broke a little on that last line about wanting the Friend pendant. Damn you, Mr. Wizard.<br /><br />Fantastic!!!ilimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17899071063752311737noreply@blogger.com