She speaks, and all my senses come to awareness. Her voice not only fills the room, but it seems to also echo outside of the room, and inside my own mind. "You," she says, with the air of a queen and also the gentleness of a family member, "are Rosalline. Am I correct?"
"Are...are you an angel?" I asked tentatively. I wondered whether or not my sanity was still intact; in this place I could see an insect and think of it a king.
So what is the mistake? I'll give you guys some time and then I'll post more later.
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